Disappointment

Earlier this week, in my News Reporting class, we read an article about a gang rape at the University of Virginia.  A horrific situation is described in a Rolling Stone article that went into great detail of both the crime and the aftermath.  Throughout the article, I was amazed by how poorly the schools administration was said to have handled the rape.  The article also described shocking responses by the victim’s friends to her rape.  A “protect UVA first” scenario was described.

I read the whole article and I must admit, I didn’t think twice about the validity of the article.  I understood the explanation for why the renamed rapists weren’t questioned for the piece.  It all seemed legit.

Unfortunately, today I received an email from my instructor saying that Rolling Stone’s managing editor has come out and said that they have discovered discrepancies in the victims account and that they regret their decision to not interview the accused.

This is unfortunate for many reasons but mostly because it changes the dialogue from being about sexual assaults, which do happen all the time at universities all over the country, to about a reporters mistakes in not fully reporting a story.  I doubt the reporter failed to interview the claimed assailants out of laziness.  I imagine it was because of several different factors including the victims confidentiality, as well as, fear of her attackers.  However, the story needed that angle to be complete.  It’s a disappointing situation all around.

Water Conservation Hypocrites

A drought in California has water officials and politicians asking state residents to cut back on their water usage considerably.

However, according to an article by The Center of Investigative Reporting, several officials are not abiding by their own requests. The drought has only increases between 2012-2013, yet several California officials have increased their water usage in that span. Some officials are reported to have used three-times as much water per day as the average California citizen does.

This piece of investigative journalism shines a light on a massive hypocrisy that is occurring in one of the countries most notable states.

Check this article out by pressing the link above.

Oil in South Texas

The two stories about oil in South Texas that we read for class complimented each other.  One was about the health issues revolving around the oil company in Eagle Ford and another was about the booms of oil in Texas, its downfall, and then its revival in South Texas.

http://eagleford.publicintegrity.org

The article “Big Oil, Bad Air,” hyperlinked above, is about a woman who lives in Karnes City, Texas, who is suffering from breathing issues caused by the drilling site at Eagle Ford.  The article talks about how she hates her home  since the oil company has moved in and how her life has changed for the worse.

http://www.texasmonthly.com/story/the-oil-boom-of-south-texas

The article, “Ya’ll Smell that? That’s the Smell of Money,” is by Bryan Mealer whose family hit gold with the oil boom in Texas making them incredibly rich. However, the boom ended and his father eventually filed for bankruptcy. Later in life, after a career in journalism, Mealer became part of the Eagle Ford oil company because of the natural draw that he felt towards the oil business.

The two stories are two completely different angles on the same topic. We talked in class about how the articles are better understood if they are both read. Reading both articles gives the reader two points of view on the oil drilling in South Texas that one wouldn’t see reading just one of the articles.

Show, don’t tell.

If you don’t already know, (I’m kind of a big deal) this semester I’m writing for the Columbia Missourian newspaper. I cover sports and more specifically golf and volleyball until wrestling season begins, when I’ll add that to my beat as well.

Thus far in the semester I have had trouble showing, not telling in my first two articles. Showing, not telling is a phrase that writers use to describe the act of describing things and letting the reader see the image as apposed to simply telling the reader what happened.

My stories have been full of necessary facts but I have struggled to put my own narrative spin on them because I haven’t covered any events live.

I’m exited to get my first opportunity to cover some events next week and test my more creative writing side, well at least as creative as journalism allows.

Check my twitter: @joshhesseltine and ColumbiaMissourian.com for future and precious articles.

Previous articles:

http://www.columbiamissourian.com/a/178622/columbia-college-golf-struggles-early-in-first-fall-tournament/

http://www.columbiamissourian.com/a/178919/columbia-colleges-top-golfer-to-miss-fall-season/

Football is back, but the NFL is just better

Last Thursday night marked the beginning of 2014 NFL season with the defending Super Bowl champion Seattle Seahawks defeating the Green Bay Packers. The previous week college football began with the defending National Champion Florida State Seminoles beating Oklahoma State.

Ahhh… Football season is finally here. From now until the Super bowl I will spend the vast majority of my time thinking, watching and talking football.

I will be watching college football no doubt but despite my love for the Tigers I just find the NFL to be more entertaining.

The NFL, in my opinion, is the best sports league in the world. Every week has so much long-term effect on the outcome of the season. Each game of the season can be the difference between going to the playoffs or not.

The competition in the NFL is closer than any other sport, specifically the NBA which is a very top heavy league at the moment, or even college football, where it seems very challenging for small schools to get the recruits to compete with top programs.

In the NFL, any team can turn it around in one year. A coaching change, a good draft, or even a free agent signing or two can put a team into immediate contention.

I think a sports fan would be hard pressed to find a better playoff than that of the NFL.  Because the competition is so tight we have seen last place seeds win the Super Bowl on multiple occasions.  Though college football is going to a playoff format, a four team playoff just doesn’t match the 12 team system of the NFL. 

So stay tuned and watch the NFL because anything can happen.

Published

Today I saw my byline in print for the first time. Last night I knew that it would be in print after I edited it but it didn’t really sink in until I saw it with my own eyes holding the paper this morning.  Something I had written was printed in a paper that people all over Columbia read to get their news.

Getting my first article done was freeing in that I know my stories can only get better from here on. Although I know my article wasn’t perfect by any means it still was acceptable. I know that with time my writing skills will only improve.

I’m excited to work hard throughout this semester, and when it’s all said and done, look back and see how far I have come.

Billboards

For the past few days I’ve been enjoying a vacation in Dallas, TX. I saw the Dallas Cowboys play on Thanksgiving, a JFK museum located where he was assassinated, and the famous stockyards where cowboys began their journey running Longhorns north to Missouri. Overall, the vacation was great. I was impressed with how clean and modern Dallas is. I noticed that the city was innovative in it’s approach to advertising but also continued to use classic and proven methods such as billboards.

Living in Columbia, Mo I don’t see many billboards unless I’m traveling on the highway. This was not the case in Dallas. Like most big cities, Dallas has billboards everywhere. They are placed on the sides of buildings and along the freeways. They advertise local, regional and national businesses. Seeing all these billboards made me realize that even with all the advancements of technology a correctly placed image still may be the most cost effective way to advertise.

Billboards date back to the mid 1800’s and have been around in smaller forms since the 1700’s through the advent of lithography, which made printing posters possible. Billboards were initially used for advertising circuses and movies in attempt to catch the eyes of more costumers. In 1908, the Model T automobile was invented instantly making highways and roads a great marketing outlet. As more people were able to own a vehicle, billboards moved away from being just in urban areas and were placed along major roads everywhere.

Today, standard billboards continue to be popular even with the boom of the internet and cell phones for advertising. However, billboard-size screens are used often as well. These screens act the same as billboards except they run through several different advertisements pausing on each for a few seconds at a time. This allows for one location to advertise for several businesses. The screens being digitally controlled makes updates and changes timely and simple.

In the future all billboards may turn digital and I can’t see a reason why they shouldn’t but I don’t see a time in the near future where billboard-type advertising loses it’s relevance. It is cheaper than television and can have huge viewer reach when properly applied.

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